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本页为 2014考研英语一 写作部分的完整题目与参考范文。Part A 为应用文(小作文)10 分,Part B 为图画作文(大作文)20 分。建议先自己限时写完,再对照范文看结构与表达差异。
Part A 51. Directions: Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition. You should include the details you think necessary. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
Part B 52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
51见上方题目要求
参考范文参考范文:
Dear Mr. President,
I am writing to offer some suggestions on improving students’ physical condition on campus.
Many students sit for long hours and lack regular exercise. I recommend adding more PE classes and making them more varied, such as swimming and ball games. The university could also upgrade sports facilities, extend gym opening hours, and organize weekly sports events or morning runs. A simple health check each term would help students monitor their fitness.
These measures would greatly benefit students’ health and academic performance. I hope you will consider them.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
解析建议信须用正式格式:称呼Dear Mr. President,结尾Yours sincerely后另起一行署Li Ming,不可写真名与地址。语气礼貌、建设性。首段点明目的——就改善学生体质提出建议;中间给出可操作措施,如增加并丰富体育课、升级场馆并延长开放、组织每周赛事或晨跑、每学期简易体检等;末段点出对健康与学业的益处并希望校方考虑。易漏:建议空泛、未扣“体质”、漏礼貌收尾、字数明显不足或超标。
52见上方题目要求
参考范文参考范文:
The drawing vividly depicts two scenes of “walking hand in hand.” In the first, in the past, a young mother holds her little daughter’s hand while they walk, full of care and trust. In the second, now, the grown daughter gently supports her aging mother, who leans on her for balance. The roles have been reversed, yet the same tenderness remains.
The intended meaning is that raising children and caring for parents are two sides of one responsibility. Parents give love in the past; in return, children give care in the present. Filial piety is not a slogan, but daily care: helping an elderly parent walk, preparing meals, listening patiently, and accompanying them to appointments.
In an aging society, families should shoulder this responsibility with warmth, while social elderly-care services provide necessary support. Neither families alone nor institutions alone can fully meet the elderly’s needs. Busyness should not become an excuse for absence. Only when family care and public support work together can the elderly be truly cared for.
解析图画作文紧扣「相携」:三十年前母亲牵着女儿,如今女儿搀着母亲。首段描述两幅画面的角色互换。中段阐释:父母养育与子女反哺是同一份责任的往返,孝道不是口号而是日常照料。末段评论:老龄化背景下,家庭照料与社会养老需共同托底,别让「忙」成为缺席的借口。可用 in the past / now / in return 组织对照。
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