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Music means different things to different people and sometimes even different things to the same person at different moments of his life. It might be poetic, philosophical, sensual, or mathematical, but in any case it must, in my view, have something to do with the soul of the human being. Hence it is metaphysical; but the means of expression is purely and exclusively physical: sound. I believe it is precisely this permanent coexistence of metaphysical message through physical means that is the strength of music. (46) It is also the reason why when we try to describe music with words, all we can do is articulate our reactions to it, and not grasp music itself.
Beethoven’s importance in music has been principally defined by the revolutionary nature of his compositions. He freed music from hitherto prevailing conventions of harmony and structure. Sometimes I feel in his late works a will to break all signs of continuity. The music is abrupt and seemingly disconnected, as in the last piano sonata. In musical expression, he did not feel restrained by the weight of convention. (47) By all accounts he was a freethinking person, and a courageous one, and I find courage an essential quality for the understanding, let alone the performance, of his works.
This courageous attitude in fact becomes a requirement for the performers of Beethoven’s music. His compositions demand the performer to show courage, for example in the use of dynamics. (48) Beethoven’s habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage was only rarely used by composers before him.
Beethoven was a deeply political man in the broadest sense of the word. He was not interested in daily politics, but concerned with questions of moral behavior and the larger questions of right and wrong affecting the entire society. (49) Especially significant was his view of freedom, which, for him, was associated with the rights and responsibilities of the individual: he advocated freedom of thought and of personal expression.
Beethoven’s music tends to move from chaos to order as if order were an imperative of human existence. For him, order does not result from forgetting or ignoring the disorders that plague our existence; order is a necessary development, an improvement that may lead to the Greek ideal of spiritual elevation. It is not by chance that the Funeral March is not the last movement of the Eroica Symphony, but the second, so that suffering does not have the last word. (50) One could interpret much of the work of Beethoven by saying that suffering is inevitable, but the courage to fight it renders life worth living.
46请翻译第 46 处划线句。
参考译文这也正是我们试图用语言描述音乐时,只能说出自己对它的反应,而无法把握音乐本身的原因。
解析先抓主干 It is also the reason why…,why 从句里再套 when 时间状语与 all we can do is…and not… 并列。articulate 宜译“说出/表达”,grasp 译“把握/抓住本质”,reactions to it 译“对它的反应”。参考译法把原因后置、把英语名词化结构拆成汉语流水句,并增补“只能……而无法……”。失分点:漏译 also、把 grasp 译成“抓住音乐”过实、when 从句位置乱导致因果不清。
47请翻译第 47 处划线句。
参考译文据各方说法,他是一个思想自由且富有勇气的人,而我发现,勇气是理解其作品——更不必说演奏其作品——所必备的品质。
解析主干为 he was…and I find courage an essential quality…。By all accounts 固定译“据各方说法/众所周知”,freethinking 译“思想自由的”,let alone 译“更不必说/遑论”。find+宾语+宾补可译“我发现……是……所必备的”。技巧:and a courageous one 承前省译为“且富有勇气”;of his works 同时管 understanding 与 performance。易错:let alone 译成“更不用说理解”颠倒层次,courageous one 漏译。
48请翻译第 48 处划线句。
参考译文贝多芬习惯以极大的强度提升音量,随即突然接上一段轻柔乐段,这种手法在他之前的作曲家中极少使用。
解析主语是长名词短语 Beethoven’s habit of…and then…,谓语 was only rarely used by…。increasing the volume with an extreme intensity 译“以极大强度提升音量”,abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage 译“突然接上轻柔乐段”。宜把habit 抽成“这种习惯/手法”作话题,被动转“极少为……所使用”。失分:dynamics 相关词漏译、rarely 程度不够、before him 译成“在他面前”。
49请翻译第 49 处划线句。
参考译文尤为重要的是他对自由的看法:在他看来,自由与个人的权利与责任相联系;他倡导思想自由和个人表达自由。
解析倒装 Especially significant was his view 宜还原为“尤为重要的是他对自由的看法”。which 非限定从句说明 associated with the rights and responsibilities of the individual;后半 advocated 两个 of 并列。技巧:冒号或分号拆层,freedom of thought and of personal expression 译“思想自由与个人表达自由”。易漏 responsibilities(责任)、把 political 语境下的 freedom 译成空洞的“自由自在”。
50请翻译第 50 处划线句。
参考译文人们可以这样解读贝多芬的许多作品:苦难不可避免,但与之抗争的勇气使生命值得一过。
解析主干 One could interpret much of the work…by saying that…。inevitable 译“不可避免”,renders life worth living 译“使生命值得一过/活下去”。by saying that 可处理为冒号或“人们可以这样解读:”。suffering 与 courage to fight it 形成转折,须译出“但与之抗争的勇气”。常见扣分:work 单复数、worth living 译成“值得生活的勇气”搭配错乱、漏译 much of。
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