2013 英语一 · 5 题

2013考研英语一 · 翻译

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2013考研英语一翻译原文

Section II Reading Comprehension / Part C

It is speculated that gardens arise from a basic human need in the individuals who made them: the need for creative expression. There is no doubt that gardens evidence an irrepressible urge to create, express, fashion, and beautify and that self-expression is a basic human urge; (46) yet when one looks at the photographs of the gardens created by the homeless, it strikes one that, for all their diversity of styles, these gardens speak of various other fundamental urges, beyond that of decoration and creative expression.

One of these urges has to do with creating a state of peace in the midst of turbulence, a “still point of the turning world,” to borrow a phrase from T. S. Eliot. (47) A sacred place of peace, however crude it may be, is a distinctly human need, as opposed to shelter, which is a distinctly animal need. This distinction is so much so that where the latter is lacking, as it is for these unlikely gardeners, the former becomes all the more urgent. Composure is a state of mind made possible by the structuring of one's relation to one's environment. (48) The gardens of the homeless, which are in effect homeless gardens, introduce form into an urban environment where it either didn't exist or was not discernible as such. In so doing they give composure to a segment of the inarticulate environment in which they take their stand.

Another urge or need that these gardens appear to respond to, or to arise from, is so intrinsic that we are barely ever conscious of its abiding claims on us. When we are deprived of green, of plants, of trees, (49) most of us give in to a demoralization of spirit which we usually blame on some psychological conditions, until one day we find ourselves in a garden and feel the oppression vanish as if by magic. In most of the homeless gardens of New York City the actual cultivation of plants is unfeasible, yet even so the compositions often seem to represent attempts to call forth the spirit of plant and animal life, if only symbolically, through a clumplike arrangement of materials, an introduction of colors, small pools of water, and a frequent presence of petals or leaves as well as of stuffed animals. On display here are various fantasy elements whose reference, at some basic level, seems to be the natural world. (50) It is this implicit or explicit reference to nature that fully justifies the use of the word garden, though in a “liberated” sense, to describe these synthetic constructions. In them we can see biophilia – a yearning for contact with nonhuman life – assuming uncanny representational forms.

参考译文与得分要点

  1. 46请翻译第 46 处划线句。

    参考译文然而,当人们看到那些无家可归者所建造的花园的照片时,就会意识到,尽管这些花园风格多样,它们都表明了人类其他的根本需求,而不仅仅是装饰和创造性的表达。

    解析yet 表转折,主干为 when 时间状语从句 + it strikes one that…。looks at the photographs of the gardens created by the homeless 宜译为“看到无家可归者所建花园的照片”;for all their diversity of styles 是让步,译“尽管风格多样”;speak of…beyond… 勿直译成“说话”,应作“表明/体现……而不止于”。技巧:it strikes one 转主动“就会意识到”,定语后置。失分点:漏译 yet、把 homeless 译成“家里没人”、beyond 漏译。

  2. 47请翻译第 47 处划线句。

    参考译文一块宁静的圣地,无论多么简陋,都是人类特有的需求,而庇护所则是动物特有的需求。

    解析主干 A sacred place of peace is a distinctly human need;however crude it may be 为让步插入,as opposed to shelter, which… 对比动物需求。distinctly 译“特有的/截然不同的”,crude 译“简陋”而非“粗鲁”。技巧:让步从句前置或夹在主语后;which 定语从句拆成并列分句。失分点:漏 however、把 sacred 译成宗教圣地过死、opposed to 译成“反对”。

  3. 48请翻译第 48 处划线句。

    参考译文无家可归者的花园实际上是无家之园,它们把形式引入城市环境中,而在这种环境中,形式要么原本不存在,要么并不明显。

    解析主干 The gardens…introduce form into an urban environment;which are in effect homeless gardens 为非限制性定语,where 从句修饰 environment。in effect 译“实际上”;didn’t exist or was not discernible 对应“原本不存在或不明显”。技巧:定语从句拆译、被动转状态描述。失分点:homeless gardens 字面死译、discernible 漏译、where 关系搞错导致逻辑断裂。

  4. 49请翻译第 49 处划线句。

    参考译文我们大多数人会精神萎靡,通常将其归咎于某些心理状况,直到有一天置身花园,感到那种压抑如魔法般消失。

    解析主干 most of us give in to a demoralization of spirit;which we usually blame on… 修饰萎靡状态;until 引出时间结果。give in to 译“陷入/变得”,demoralization of spirit 作“精神萎靡”,oppression vanish as if by magic 译“压抑如魔法般消失”。技巧:blame on 转“归咎于”,until 保留时间层次。失分点:psychological conditions 译成“心理疾病”过重、漏 until 或 magic。

  5. 50请翻译第 50 处划线句。

    参考译文正是这种对自然或含蓄或明确的参照,充分证明了用“花园”一词来描述这些人造建筑是合理的,尽管是在一种“广义”的意义上。

    解析强调句 It is this…reference to nature that fully justifies…。implicit or explicit 译“或含蓄或明确”;liberated sense 对应“广义/宽泛意义”;synthetic constructions 译“人造建筑/合成构造”。技巧:强调句保留“正是……才……”,though 让步后置。失分点:漏 implicit/explicit、liberated 译成“解放的”、justify 译成“公正”而非“证明……合理”。

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